House Description

Do you want a new home without the wait? This family friendly, move-in ready home is offered by us. Across the street from the park, with shopping just blocks away, you have to come and see it. Don't miss this one! Open kitchen and a fabulous backyard. Ready for you and your family.This house is located in a very friendly neighborhood that you must not miss. Stop by our model home in West Prairie Village for details in Sun Prairie.

This is a detached house with two floors, with a very big garden and, apparently, its construction it’s made of wood and concrete. Also, it’s painted in sky-blue, but has a natural brown colour, which is made based in the concrete material, that seems like tile.

At the side of the house, there are a garage that has a white gate and it is opened electrically.

By the way, all its doors are white, except its main door that is the entry of the house, which is black. Also in its facade there are some plants, which gave to the the house a little more colour and life.

As same as the outside, the environment it is peaceful because of its light brown colour, which helps a lot to make us feel very comfortable. The place consists in spacious rooms. Each one of them have lively colours, so every member of the family can enjoy the house.

Now we are going to show you room by room. We hope that you like it!

Video: The black hole

              At the beginning of the video there was a man trying to photocopy something...sadly, the device didn't work but, the young man saw a sheet that came out of the device with a black spot on it. Accidently a vessel of water fell down into a black hole (not really a spot), penetrating the sheet. Well, finally he tryed to steal somethings like a sweet and also money through this hole becaouse he could transfix with his hand the black hole to inaccesible places. But, the problem started when he transfixed with all his body this hole. After that, the sheet with the black hole fell down, so the man stayed into the security box, in which there was a lot of money. 

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This is one of the latest paragraphs that I did, but was the only in which I could narrate a video.

The best time for me

       The best time for me is the morning because of its weather so, usually I go to the beach for walking a while and to take some pictures of something interesting. Most of the time I take pictures of landscapes, I mean, beaches, squares, ancients buildings or just something specific like plants, etc. The best thing that I sometimes do inthe morning is to do some excercises...to breathe that pure air, and also fresh air it is very healthful in all sense. Although in winter, I don't go to to do excercises to the beach but in my house because, obviously, is it cold.

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This was my first paragraph. At this point, I didn't know how important is the topic sentence. Here I learned how to summarize my ideas. 

Using an incident.

           Last September was a exciting month. There was a part of my family that I didn't see since I came to Iquique, and I wanted to talk with them since a long time. Then, I took the opportunity of the days off this last September so, I went to Santiago, and finally I met with all of them, and we talked about everything we could.The best of all was that we went out all those days, we ate too much...and when I had to come back to Iquique, we were satisfied for all what we did. I loved those days, however, I also love Iquique so, I felt happy when I came back to this city too.

Using examples

           September is a month of celebration. It's also called "month of the motherland" because, September 18th and 19th it is commemorated the Chilean independence, and Chilean people is, I would say, cheerful.

These two days of celebration, are an opportunity for resting from work and to have a good time in the fondas or ramadas. Here, people can eat typical Chilean food like, empanadas, choripanes, etc, and to drink a lot of chicha.

But, one of the main typical activities is the "parada militar", that take place in O'Higgins Park ,in which participate very important people like, the President and other government's authorities.

Using sensory details

           My favourite month is September. I love when Winter is leaving  and  begins the spring season. September is a very joyful month for me because there are a lot of  days off, people looks happy and the weather begins to improve. Obviously, the flowers begin to grow and the landscape is better than how look in the winter. I also like September because is the half of the year and the end of the year is only a few months away.

So, I enjoy so much this month, well, I enjoy all the year but, specifically this one is special for me and would call it “The colorful month”. 

Psychological description 

              Psychologically, David, looks in the same way than his likeness becouse is very humble, but confident, funny and wise and his best characteristic is that he is a very loyal person, not only with me but, with all the people that he knows in his life.

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Here, I'm still learning to use some words for describing but, with a few mistakes yet.

Physical description

              My best friend has long, straight, black hair. Also, he has thin eyebrows, long nose and some freckles. He is very thin and average height. He always is in a T -shirt with a pair of jeans...he is very simple, although, he has a lot of money, but doesn't seem like a rich man.

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This paragraph is about a friend's physical description. Here I learned how to put specific information in a context.